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J.King337
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got a new poem ready for this Sunday!! It's entitled "The Unspoken Lesson".

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Venom: Tell it Like it is

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Sincerely speaking I must honestly say you cannot visualize me,

Look upon my soul and envision pain ten fold;

Adaptive it has become,

A part of my purities I nuture it as if I created it.

Pity me not for here I stand,

Broken yet so full of joy

As one day I will overcome.

Pain leads to strength unmeasured,

Even though it is self inflicted

A weak minded fool I am not.

As I onced said we are our own judge

What other people say are opinions based on perception;

So again I say,

How can you judge me as though you know?

Were you there when I waa born into this world?

Were you there when I spoke my first words?

Were you there doing my lonely nights as I wished

Upon shooting stars for my parents comfort from Heaven?

Answer me?

I thought you knew me well?

Then again you are human I suppose.

As I end this I shall also say this

The hell with you and everything you stand for.

Before you judge me and anybody else,

Look in the mirror and visualize who you truly are.

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love_supreme says:

Thats keeping it real.

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J.king337 says:

Appreciate it bruh!
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jojo says:

man i'm loving this. keep it up homey and keep it real always.
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DeleDivine says:

This is so TRUE!! I love this! You tell them Brother.:)<3
 

takiyahalee says:

I am a fan! It is like you speak how I feel but my words can never do justice...What you have is way beyond talent, It is a Gift! Thank you for sharing.

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J.king337 says:

Thank u all for your positive feedbacks!!

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