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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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the walls are blue

the doors are brown

I hate this color

I hate this town

it's too much noise

and I hate the sound

some are crawling and

some are running around

it's not my business

I'm not in it

I'm just here

wishing that I was there

I close my eyes

It's no surprise

that I see inside

telling myself

self it's time to rise

there's no use in

hanging around

any longer

the smoke is thick

and the attitudes are

getting stronger

some are high and

others are loaded

reading something and

forgot that I wrote it

take the keys

I'm in the weeds

desperately trying to breathe

the morning agony

my head is throbbing

it's 4am and I'm out

looking for a

waffle house

 

 

 

 

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Phenomenal Paris says:

I'm feeling this! You always give me something to think about!

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scash102 says:

Nice! Sometimes that late night-early morning drive is all the peace u need and its nothing wrong with that.

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