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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I promise you to do the best that

I can do in order to glue together

the broken promises that I made to you

 

the shattering that took trusting me

away from you

 

I do not know what it will take

or what I will have to go through

 

maybe it might be too late but

if you would just believe

 

like the air that you breathe

I will do everything that I can

to refresh your mind about me

 

not once do I blame you for

doubting me because I was

being selfish and only thinking

of me

 

as I stand with this keychain

holding the key to a lock that

has been changed

 

I've been trying to get in

but found that I can't

 

I messed up because I

didn't think about us

 

I knew I would drown

but I had to have that drink

 

It was too late when I started

to feel myself sinking

 

It wasn't enough because

I just kept on drinking

 

hoping that you would save me

like so many times you had before

 

I came knocking at your door

sometimes beating my knuckles sore

 

you always took me in and everytime

I F'd over you even though you

were my friend

 

my only reason to be here

is to make amends

 

I'm dry as a drought but how

can I get in if you keep on

kicking me out

 

 

 

 

 

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tretre says:

I'm sharing this one WizeDom I hope you don't mind. This is going on my favorites list, even though I have so many of your poems on my favorites list. I know a few people who can relate to this poem. As always keep that pen movin!!!
 

scash102 says:

I can some what relate to this, from similar experience. Great poem though!

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