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lightness in the dark
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Our Love Is Like A Rainy Day:

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Our love started out being like a ray of sunshine,

everwhere we went our love shined so bright, no

sign of dark clouds in sight.

Then out of nowhere our love became gray,

there was no explaination for the sudden change,

everything begin to feel so strange.

Slowly but surely,  our love begin to show those dark clouds,

the love we once shared begin to fade,our love became

sharper then a swordsman's blade, the love we once had

couldn't be portrayed.

Each moment that passed came with heavy drops of change,

some light, some heavy, having no cover our love became

blury.

Trying to recover what we once had, but your attitude became

like thunder, hidden between the dark clouds, I

couldn't explain it, so it made me wonder.

Then lighting begin to strike, making our love 

something I disliked.

Afraid of  the damage our  love could cause,

our love is now on pause.

When things begin to clear up, to my dismay, things once

again became gray, 

being able to figure out what would come next

I couldn't bring myself to stay.

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scash102 says:

Wow, very touching
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tretre says:

Thank you Scash for always showin love...I' am have to add you to my to list of favoriotes.. You always show love even when you don't have to and I appericate that. I will try my best to keep up with your poems. Always keep that pen movin Scash!!!

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twistedbeauty says:

I love this poem I amongst many others can relate. keep writing.

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Intheshadowz says:

I can relate to a love turniin grey .. Niice wriittiing

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