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PoeticallyGifted
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been gone for about 5 months. ive written a lot. but i felt compelled to share my new piece "The Heart's Deception".

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my eyes are seeing red
its seems like a life and death-
decision if i choose to move ahead 
my anger is getting harder to control
i have to punch something to once again get a hold-
on reality
my knuckles turn black and blue 
i dont know what do
thats why im clinging on to you
anxious for the proof or a clue 
that the truth will be something people will actually will want to listen to
before i spend years showing people my skills and attributes
to end up not getting anywhere close to doing what i wanted to do
~PEACE

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hymnagen says:

This is a "real talk" piece. I can feel the frustration and that is a testament to your talent. If your writing keeps you grounded, keep doing it

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PoeticallyGifted says:

thank you.

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