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HymnAgen
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lightness in the dark
Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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LADY (Updated Spoken Rendition)

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Sista, I do not need to see the tops of your breasts bare

to know they’re there,

 

nor the flesh of your cheeks where butt and thighs meet

to know you have a bangin physique.

 

My days of roamin the street

lookin for women to meet dressed like freaks

are far behind me.

That garb only reminds me

of how trifling I used to be.

 

Now, I know each of you is able

to bring more to the table

than I used to give credit for,

but stable employment and ambition,

titles and positions

might as well be breasts and cheeks, too,

if used to accomplish the same mission.

 

Sista, are you listening?

 

I'm lookin for a queen, not a vixen.

I want a partner, not competition

who's always trying to put my pants on

attempting to lock me up in the kitchen

barefoot and metrosexualized…

Huh, neva that.

 

The woman I've conceptualized is

 neither nor. They're too extreme.

I love y’all somewhere in between –

displaying your self-esteem like plumage:

 

With you shoulders back,

 

and your head held high.

 

Sexy regality displayed in every stride you take

with that pendulous ladylike gait –

Leaving somethin to my imagination

without looking colder than a battle hardened soldier

in corporate uniforms with broad, padded shoulders.

 

I want to bathe in the rays of your femininity,

and behold you in your wondrous femaledom

as it was meant to be fully appreciated by all

who are blessed to be in the presence of – a LADY.

-HymnAgen

https://soundcloud.com/hymnagen/lady

 

 

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catmartan says:

AWESOME ! THANK YOU FOR SHARING !

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jevans1194 says:

I loved reading every moment of it! Very good write

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hymnagen says:

Thank you for your comments!

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scash102 says:

Finally something i can relate to and elaborate on when it comes to our queens n kings and dating as well as maturity. Feels good to know there are still men like u around..

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Number3 says:

Word Up!

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ferdinandmagellan says:

Dude... That's Nice. I enjoy your writing

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kavindra says:

impressive ! and expressive !
 

TwistedInk says:

Wow that was great you are gifted with your words

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hymnagen says:

scash102 thanx, that is a humbling commentary.Number3, ferdinandmagellan, kavindra, TwistedInk: I've read some of your works; I feel like I'm keeping exceptional company here. Peace

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tjaigreen says:

Love it! Your message is on point.

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hymnagen says:

Thanks for saying so, tjaigreen. i appreciate you reading it.

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DallasCowgirl says:

One of my favorite

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hymnagen says:

One of mine, too. Thnx!

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Sin

 

DallasCowgirl says:

Had to reread this gem over a year later. Can I please share this gem?

 

love_supreme says:

These are true words. Excellent write.

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hymnagen says:

#MuchAppreciation

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JustOneStoryTeller says:

Bravo! So loved this Hymnagen awesome work!
 

Tali says:

This is beautiful

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