Justformine | Poetry Vibe
Justformine
This poet practices good karma and posts comments 5600
contest winner
anyone has any tips or advice I'd love yur input. Email not set up so just leave a comment. wanna start expanding my writing style.

Site Rank

BRIGADIER GENERAL

  brigadier general
Total poems   38
Lifetime Views   11895
Total poems - 7 days   0
Total poems - 30 days   0
Total poems - 90 days   0
Total poems - 365 days   0
you need to login or register to leave a comment

Just Cant Stop

CATEGORY

life

Views: 261

Drink drink drink 

Yas this drink makin you think 

Just trynna get tipsy 

Not pissy 

But you just cant stop 

Drinkin till you drop

Dont know where you are 

Trynna drive your car 

Out on the road 

You got two little kids at home

Whats gunna happen to them

When you end up dead or in the pen

Say you wanna stop

Oh look there goes that cop

Passed right by

He aint even blink an eye

So you celebrate 

More liquor to medicate

Wake up in the morning 

Look around dont know where you are and then 

It all comes back 

How could you get that trashed 

Now you know where you are 

Last thing your rember was your daughter in the back of the car 

Your behind bars 

Did you crash? 

Dont rember that 

Oh my god is she ok 

Gotta figure out what happend some way 

Start panicking 

All the worst things are happening 

"How could this happen to me"

"Im a good person please" 

"Gaurd just tell me where my kids are"

The gaurd dont make a peep

Tell you to just go to sleep 

Says there were noo kids with you 

Whats your issue 

But how could this be true 

Say this is your last time 

But you already know thats a lie

 

 

You must be registered to leave a comment. Registration is FREE.

Register

COMMENTS

Contest Winner  

hymnagen says:

Deep capture of inner struggle. Well done

poems by this commentor


 

jevans1194 says:

When I say I felt that . You did that

poems by this commentor


login below

Forgot your username?