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lightness in the dark
Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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Emotion’s Call

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first love

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A number.

 

A dial.

 

A greeting.

 

A smile.

 

Regressed to a child.

 

Time stops for a while.

 

The past is rehashed.

 

Some silence.

 

Some laughs.

 

A lump in a throat.

 

A tear on a lash.

 

Alternate paths

considered at length.

 

The longing to ask,

but so little strength.

 

The utter of stutters,

but absence of words

that first flowed so freely

when voices first heard.

 

Metamorphosis from

ease to awkwardness.

 

Tongue tethered and numb

like Novocained gums.

 

Silly thoughts chasing

the memories racing

throughout a cortex

in deep contemplation.

 

“You still there?” in the ear

returns focus to clear.

 

Romantically hopeless,

a mutter of “Yeah.”

 

Reason recovered.

 

Eased into other

less pleasing, but safer

topics to cover.

 

Pretense exhausted.

 

Farewells being served.

 

Good-byes are spoken,

but no clicks are heard.

 

Line remains open.

 

The silence is cursed

by each other’s long

that the other’s click first

 

like when they were new

 

-HymnAgen

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The Immortal Wize says:

This is very sweet, it brings back so many memories.

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hymnagen says:

Thanx Wize Dom. Went thru something similar last nite on FBook and couldn't sleep without trying to capture the feeling...
 

catmartan says:

Awesome !!!!
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2b2b2 says:

Brilliant Work....ONE
 

kavindra says:

very well crafted !

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hymnagen says:

kind words from fellow writers is always validating. Thanx 2 each of U

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tjaigreen says:

Awesome! Your words really capture an age of innocence.

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hymnagen says:

Thank you tjaigreen!

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love_supreme says:

This is on point and your blog entries are pure inspiration.

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Woven says:

Captured those feelings so succinctly, those long moments of pause. Awesome expression!

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hymnagen says:

Thanks for checking out my blog, latin_lover. My latest work often don't make it here from there.

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hymnagen says:

worka
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hymnagen says:

Let;s try that again..."works"

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hymnagen says:

Thanks, Woven. This is one of my favorite pieces. Your feedback means a lot!

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