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Erased From This Earth

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Death Angel really busy

in my community

So many visits to the family

and real friends who

are true

As a mere mortal accept it

nothin else I can do

Find it quite ironic to lose

two special friends 800 miles apart

the acceptence broke my heart

left a void

The irony is they both   passed

on Oct 3rd

Death Angel like a eraser on

on a penciled pad

erasing my friends makin my soul

really quite sad

Am thankful though the Death Angel

take my friend body away

my beautiful memory of them

will always stay

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2b2b2 says:

Great Work....Sobering topic...thanks for sharing!
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thanks 2b to be sure
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tretre says:

WOW!!! MrMelody!!! I really like this poem, it speaks for everyone who can relate, including myself. Beautiful write MrMelody. Always keep that pen movin!!!

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Mz tretre wonderful friends are not replaceable nor other loved ones

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