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Kavindra
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lightness in the dark
This latest poem - I am just not sure -the message is sound but it starts a bit odd - ah who am I kidding I am eccentric

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Lawless Deeds

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Lawless Deeds

harsh and cold

this world

does behold

hidden is the beauty

of the youth

it could be told

mine is mine

I dont combine

his behind

the doors

of others

is the hidden sublime

of his youthful

concubine

groomed

for pleasurable needs

his lawless deeds

in his demands

of an arresting feed

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write
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hymnagen says:

Am I twisted, or does this read like a window on things prurient in nature? Wonderful word choices. Bravo

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