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lightness in the dark
Love First and Love Lasts

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A  star  is  formed

Its  course  is  drawn

Visions  of  past  reawakening

Born  from  an  earth  making

To  view  its  worth staking in

Warming  hearts  to aspire

Knowing  one  day  to  return

Far  away  wishes true  in  living

Believing  such  power  lifting

Away from  the  clouds  of  pun

Between  darks  nights  for  some

Exists  a  first  born  Sun shining

Among  shadows  of  cold  reaching

Gathering  for  a paternal  concern

Pathways  in space  for  a  time to  burn

A  test  of  the  measurements  counting

As  all  vision  is  fixed  as  a  nexus

Choices  are  certain  2b  vexing,  

Perplexing the  connection  that persists

Covering spans  of  progeny  repeating cycles

For  parents  throughout  history  to  mourn....

The loss  of  the  only  Sun  that  was shown

Hoping  that  it  finds  a  way  back  home

Out shining  concern......we  let  it  burn thru

Hearts  captured  since  birth  under  constellations

Paving  the  fateful  day  when  we  are  saved  by  our  Sun

 

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love_supreme says:

This is classical. Excellent write.

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royale jones says:

Brilliant write love the story told to the ending message. Truth!
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2b2b2 says:

Thank you latin_lover......ONE
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks my brother royale jones....ONE

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Coalhouse says:

Dope piece

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2b2b2 says:

Thanks Brother Coalhouse.....ONE

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