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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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have you ever walked into an ambush

something that you did not prepare your emotions to feel

something waiting for you up or down the hill

when my brother stops laying his brother down

we can win the revolution

 

as long as we continue to take our own lives

we remain divided and conquered

with self-hate in our eyes we never see it coming

we feel the rain and hear the thunder

still it's the hurricane that takes us under

 

if the people are not chosen

why are they being persecuted

why are they sought out to be crucified

why is it that their blood shed

so powerful that it causes and up rise

 

we are chosen that the truth that never lied

why is a black president

calling his own people colored

on stage in this day and age

that seems strange

 

every time they put one down

we rise up

 

every time they put one down

we rise up

 

every time they put one down

we rise up

 

together we are giants

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catmartan says:

Awesome Volume !!!

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tjaigreen says:

"Every time they put one down we rise up". I feel you on that. I love the impact of your ending.

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hymnagen says:

**Right fist in the air; left fingers snapping** Excellent, timely piece, Wize Dom.

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