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odonko-ba
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Her beauty isn't measured by some European standard of what beauty should be but by her confidence and the fact that she is loving the skin she's in. To me, that alone is beautiful.

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The Demise of An Aspiring Poet

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romance

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feverishly
feeding off cod
discursively meandering
the letting of blood
the culmination of my own
psychosis coagulated thought
strangulated nonsense
drools


into a pool of spue


desecrated
with frivolous ideas
emanating
a stench beyond reason


that only I
find scintillating


sort of like
maggots
ensconced
in putrid libation


I drown
in spasmodic
maundering
fumbling about
in lunacy
hungering obscurity


self-debasement defiles me
my every gratitude


the rope is only the tool


slithering
in filth
of my own demise
bathing in its
deprivation
thoughts of the rope seduce sirens
what chance have I
to deny my fate


the rope is only the tool
reverberates soundly


surrounding me of my failures
swept up in a deluge of self-hatred


the rope is only the tool


Yes!!! Damn You!!!


but I


prefer the slow deprecation
of the blade

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hymnagen says:

You took me to a dark place, brotha. Helluva write
 

odonko-ba says:

thank you my friend.

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