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Possessed

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romance

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It keeps rising, This power, So enticing. My mind is blurry, My vision, cloudy. What will I do? My judgment rowdy. Yes he is my friend, A brother maybe, I hate his guts, His looks I envy. I trust my girl, I know she loves me, But I crave his looks, And I start to doubt me. And it keeps rising, My anger, Just starts slicing. From within, To without, I'm possessed, There is no doubt. She doesn't get it, I'm just insecure, I don't like my body, And his looks look like a cure.

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lyrics_Poetry says:

Very interesting. I like. We all are possessed by something. It's a disease we try to find a cure for. It all starts in the mind, but the crazy thing about the mind is it keep going it's unstoppable to control the thoughts.

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