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blakkbeauty
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VOICELESS

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Taps mic, hello is this thing on??? Can anyone hear me, I'm seeing blank stares looking back at me as I stare into the crowd. I know they hear because me because I can hear myself, there's so much I have to say but how my message is delivered from me to you is what matters the most, I want you to feel my words like a blind person that touches brail to read, Feel my word like there apart of ancient history Feel my words like a man that caresses up & down a woman's spine, Feel my words like were going back in time, back to a time when your words held so much meaning and power, HELLO is this thing on??? Again blank stares, im like I know they hear me cause I can hear myself or is it that we close our ears and tune out the positive all the while allowing the negativity if this

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blakkbeauty says:

Of this world absorb our Bruins like sponges, brainwash our minds, maybe I'm being too postive,so ima start speaking on how promiscuous, tiffany is with three different s a night, or how derrick came up in the game hes pushing brand new camero, OH ,I got your attention now, well did u know teaona graduated from yale, or james own his own business now, HELLO CAN Y HEAR ME UP HERE, I know they can hear me because I can hear myself all I see is blank stares, my mouth is moving but nothings comming out, oh I forgot im VOICELESS,in a room of negativity

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blakkbeauty says:

Of this world absorb our Bruins like sponges, brainwash our minds, maybe I'm being too postive,so ima start speaking on how promiscuous, tiffany is with three different s a night, or how derrick came up in the game hes pushing brand new camero, OH ,I got your attention now, well did u know teaona graduated from yale, or james own his own business now, HELLO CAN Y HEAR ME UP HERE, I know they can hear me because I can hear myself all I see is blank stares, my mouth is moving but nothings comming out, oh I forgot im VOICELESS,in a room of negativity

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love_supreme says:

I can really feel where this poem is coming from. Excellent write.

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The Immortal Wize says:

Ripped it!

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lyrics_Poetry says:

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It has alot of meaning to it. I understand and can relate to it. Good job.
 

LP45 says:

Great write black beauty. Keep writing.
 

Tru Sista says:

Black Beauty....spoke volumes on this one
 

after vision says:

my poet you lit a fire upon the air that we breathe filling our heart and lungs with knowledge and hope
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lovelylady1 says:

my beloved, I hear ya...xoxo's

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