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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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there's something burning

deep inside of me

emotions that play hide and seek

leaving me alone when I fall to sleep

though a part of me had to let go

there still remains so much 

left unsaid that I want you to know

though when you were alive

I just couldn't tell you so

I love the times I speak of

though they passed so long ago

something inside of me broke

shattering  decades of heartaches

sounds that linger around me

fading away into the surroundings

the only way I can give account in words

to describe this eternal loneliness 

is to clarify missing your loveliness

though I know I'll find another friend

to have some one else to kiss

the heaviest part of this is 

the hurt that out weighs the pain

 

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love_supreme says:

I really have no words for this one. This is an excellent piece.

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LP45 says:

Wow. Very heartfelt.

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