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LP45
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lightness in the dark
Hey there my fellow poets! Blessings and greetings to you all for a prosperous new year. Life has been pretty rough for me since I last posted but nonetheless, as always with God's mercy and grace I've persevered. I'm finally at a point where I can start posting again. I so miss being on here and reading everyone's works. I hope that everything is going well for everyone. Let's keep the inklove flowing!

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Sacrificial Love

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romance

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You caught my eye

I was mesmerized

You touched my face

And time stood still for just a moment.

I smiled in awe

As your personality and charm

Interposed themselves

In and around my heart

I had fallen for you.

Soon every thing became about you

My thoughts, my dreams

My days and nights

My everything.

And just when all seemed well

Subtle changes began to raise doubts

Like thermostatic mercury

Nothing was the same anymore.

My feet came out from under me

Everything was upside down

Discombobulated and turned around

Whoa!! What in the name of love!?!?!?

Life started out as we

As us, we were one

Until cold shoulders and raised noses

Brought clarity to my reality

I gave you everything I had

Willingly, unconditionally

Emotionally, spiritually and physically

What more do you want?

Your accusations even when

Proven wrong didn't hold

Any merit with you

Nothing I did mattered anymore.

Well, ha ha newsflash my friend

I refuse to be broken

Or stepped on and walked over

Like dirt and pavement.

Your hold on me has let go

Your reign of pain has ended

I've given you enough

It's time I give back to myself

You almost had me in the end

But almost doesn't count

I love me too much to be

Your sacrificial love.

 

2/25/15 by Juanita J. Smalls

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mrmelody7 says:

Such vivid imagery in this one Ladypoet so romantic was the beginning to a very surprising ending, such is love I suppose, shine on MZ Lady
 

LP45 says:

Thank you mrmelody7.
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2b2b2 says:

Eloquent purge.....smoothly crafted and conveyed....thanks for sharing Ladypoet45.....ONE
 

DallasCowgirl says:

Oh wow. I liked this!!!

 

LP45 says:

Thank so much 2b and underhiswings7. I appreciate it.
 

Poetic08' says:

I been there beautiful and beautifully written to describe what so many of us have gone through on this note, Bring it back.
 

LP45 says:

Thank you poetic08.
 

Ms.Toya2 says:

I love this!!

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LP45 says:

Thank you Ms. Toya2 for your support.

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