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HymnAgen
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lightness in the dark
Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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She Knows

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She made my heart jump like a surgeon

because my cardiac was arrested

when she stepped into my personal

space and took my breath with

the expression on her face

and the way her eyes connected

to my own made my pulse race

like that jump I felt corrected

every single biorhythm

so if she perceived my aura

she would know that she had given

me anxiety when I saw her

instantly rounding that corner

quite surprised to see her there

she would know she paralyzed me

that the fragrance of her hair

had overcome my tongue

tied it up and made it numb

she would know I founded dumb

in ways I hadn’t since I was young

she would know her smile dazzled

me like headlights do a doe

it ain’t like me to get frazzled

but her hand shake said, “I know.”

 

-HymnAgen

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mrmelody7 says:

shall I say pulsating write with dazzling rhyme scheme
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hymnagen says:

My brotha, you are too kind Thank you for these words
 

LP45 says:

Awesome! I like this, great flow and visualization. Keep writing.

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DallasCowgirl says:

Every woman's fantasy about herself...;)

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hymnagen says:

Ladypoet45, thank you for your encouraging comments!
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hymnagen says:

Underhiswings7, every dude has felt this way at one time or another. He who protests, fronts;0D

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2b2b2 says:

Tight Write.....Bravo....ONE

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hymnagen says:

2b2b2, thanks much. Peace

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KingQadarDwon' says:

Like the flow!!! Digg datt
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hymnagen says:

#Respect KingQadarDwon'

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