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Broken Love

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She said she wouldn't go back

go back to the black and blue

and the blues hold the clues

the clues shed light on her ruse

her ruse all covered in bruises

in bruises he chooses to speak

to speak is the way to get beat

get beat down so low

so low she's scared to go solo

go solo is what her friends know

friends know what's best

what's best lead to a bullet in her chest

her chest where her last breathe rests

where they all rest in pieces

pieces of a broken love

a broken love that never lives.

love that never lives

never lives.

 

 

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love_supreme says:

This is an excellent write.

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hymnagen says:

Really creative structure! The repetition drives the message home. Outstanding

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LP45 says:

Powerful. Great writing.

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2b2b2 says:

Poignant penning....well crafted...thanks for sharing!!
 

VomitOutTheMouth says:

Amazing

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