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Where's Paradise

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Where's Paradise, when the one person you want in your life can't make you there wife, where's paradise when your long distance and your love is far away from above, will I see you, will you express your feelings ever to me, and flee and lose out on ever being happy, this world is complicated nothing is guaranteed yet indeed, someone you went to school with very cool with, bow down too, all the past women put trust issues, in there but in reality is it fair to continue to blame the next upcoming respect person is it fair to not give your all to the one woman who will be loyal, one who will just make love to the one who trust fully, go out there no matter the flaws, no one is perfect we all make mistakes, its how you handle those mistakes that will carry you thru so please don't give on love because your paradise is there if u believe, and see, that there's that one person for someone so that's how I see my paradise real or not

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love_supreme says:

This is an excellent write.
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The Immortal Wize says:

Very Nice piece!

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2b2b2 says:

Beautiful Expression....Bravo....ONE
 

queensknight89 says:

Thank U everyone who sent me there comments i really love writing and expressing my feelings and emotions is what set me apart from others and it gives me a purpose to live in life.

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