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lightness in the dark

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Asylum

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For a whole three years, I thought I was free,

But unknowingly I was incarcerated in your Asylum

I subconsciously wore a straitjacket that embraced me so tightly

It masked my inner sanity

But now that I’m no longer heavy medicated with your lies

 I question was this jacket worn to keep me from harming myself or

Your ego that was build by the hurt you inflicted on me

My friends played doctor from the beginning prescribing me with Strong doses of

“Leave him” but yet I was always seeking other Doctoral opinions that would

Recommend “ rest, time, and a special dosing of keep him”

Every time I showed symptoms of leaving my comatose state,

You would make sure to strengthen your lies so I would not awake

After 3 long years in your Asylum full of your heavily medicated lies,

I finally took the prescription that was recommended the whole time.

Now I suffer from an extreme case of PTSD and it will take the right man to love a woman like me.

 

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twistedbeauty says:

Speechless.

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2b2b2 says:

Tight piece....a love jones can be crucial....ONE
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recklessmonet says:

Damn, love this poem.

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Just_Me_Kelee says:

I so feel this right now

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