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DeeliteNMe
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lightness in the dark
I am in need some inspiration...maybe I'm trying too hard!

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Heartache

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first love

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I remember the long stares from across the room, the way you would walk by just so you could talk to me. I still can feel your eyes have a conversation with me that I have yet to forget. That smile that engulfed me and drew me into your world. I was lost in you. The more we would exchange deep intellectual dialect, the more I fell for you. The day you took your eyes from mine, I was the last to know. Left drowning in your eyes, I was just trying to find an escape from the mere thought of you now. Struggling for air, I fight to survive. No longer the feeling of that new love I had, just a pain that I can't reach. 

 

 

 

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DallasCowgirl says:

Wow.... I can definitely comprehend and understand, sis. The feelings are really real....

 

love_supreme says:

Wow, very nice.

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KingQadarDwon' says:

Great write!!!!
 

Ak rio says:

Inspiring good poem

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DeeliteNMe says:

Thank you so much my beautiful people!!! This came from a deep place which was hard to find.

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