It didn't take him any time to make her smile, she was used to a certain style, she never had a man to pay attention to her like an owl. Noticing every tune of her band, it's a woman's dream to be really be noticed by her man. Compliment after compliment, accomplishment after accomplishment, there he sits reading her lips. Mesmerized by the joy she's speaking, he's happy for her, he's listening and she's teaching. He reaches deep in his heart to visualize her thoughts, while his tears of joy pours every time she talks. As long as she's happy, he's happy, they're happy, it's a fatal attraction with mutual reactions of what could happen, in the near soon future. He's her personal heart caretaker, provider, protector, very personal love maker. She cooks the dinner, he pours the wine, they take their baths, he makes her laugh. Reading stories of wisdom nightly, the learning sessions are always enticing, nevertheless enlightening. Never been struck before with a woman who's mind carry lightning, Very frightening, sometimes head over hills for this fine piece of a diamond, cut just the way he like it, he loves "mining" her business, while she's "minding"his lighting. Impressed with my brains intellectual capacity, she gets mad if he don't make a new word, the audacity, of her to hold him to such high standards, sometimes he wanna click out but he was brought up with manners and after all it's his fault for noticing everything about her and speaking a Poet's language so every once and a while she's allowed to channel her anger and he can't blame her.
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twistedbeauty says: nice vibe. keep it up |
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KingQadarDwon' says: Thank you kindly |
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Myactionspeak says: Nice! |
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hymnagen says: It's the details, my brotha..you draw me into your writes with the details. They allow me to be the narrator when I read. You got a special talent, bruh. |
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KingQadarDwon' says: @myactionspeak Thank you fam! Preciate it... |
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KingQadarDwon' says: @hymnagen Thank you fam! Preciate ya bro... That means a lot... I'm definitely humbled by your comment.. That's for the inspiration |
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DallasCowgirl says: This is very beautiful. I feel like I say that too much but really your pieces are all beautiful, ahch! You're gifted, indeed. |
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KingQadarDwon' says: Toda ahchut.. You can never say too much.. You pull it out me every time... Don't change.. Now your work is the truth! |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY KingQadarDwon'
A story that was PerfectI've once thought and told a woman that she was perfect...... Not perfect for you, but just perfect for me.
What I've witnessed and experienced was stirred, poured and cemented into our spiritual and mental legacies. The Heavens seen the poet birds sing, lyrics and expressions so powerful that they made words sink and encouraged other poets to reach deep into their bags of gifts of gab to feed to the world cures of creativity. Spiritual intimacy makes the world reign Supreme, protecting it from the evils of Tyrannical Kings whom don't deserve a thing. Started out as sentences of flings, That gave birth to paragraphs of mental beams. Essays of spiritual gleams, God willed their the diaries and legacies. Into poetic lore. In their recollections, "voices" whisper. Is it true? Is it false? Or is it both? She loss, He's lost. The Losses pile up Missing the playoffs<...  |
Spark Sumtin'(New Orleans Liberator)Here we are once again tussling with His-Story, while the Zionist are hooking and uppercutting and bombing their way to a modern day genocide, while the audience of the the world watches and does nothing Who knows you could be next, in a nutshell Zionism is white supremacy, in America it's camouflaged as the manifest Destiny, the destiny that they said that God decreed to take the land away from the so called Mexicans Catch the drift, stand up straight don't trip, some things will never change, there's poison in the minds of the ones that carry the savage brains, those of whom that the world considers inhumane out of the land of Po-Lane and Ger-mane- ney I ain't gotta say no names but you know what I'm sayin' without me even sayin' it Speak truth to power don't cower your legacy is on the line, fight the fire with fire and then smother the heat and oxygen with righteous intent and pote... |
Wazzam wit ya?! What's good with you?(Some prose for my folks)
Money don't make you Good it just makes you look Good. What I just explained to ya should never be misunderstood to you. Lest you always be misunderstood Always trying to validate yourself for others instead of just being good. Good works don't need any validations or confirmations for being the REALEST. It has been here since the beginning. It is the universe's core foundation. All was created for the Good. Evil has abandoned Good after once being joined by the hip Just to TRY to produce just a little more then Good. Evil said that Good was too quiet. Evil said that Good was too laid back. Evil said that Good didn't boast enough about it's power and beauty and take the credit that it deserved and not let anyone claim it as their own because that's FAKE. Good replied and said that I don't need any credit for that, all that I... |
The Great Swap up
Now that the so called "Queen of England" is gone, Black woman please take your throne back, it has been a long time since the world saw your divine essence and elegance". I LOVE YOU
#RightfulQueen #Rightfreequency #Queening #QDTpoet #Ultimaterespect |
What is the Truth
What is truth? Is not truth something that does not have to personally affect you? Is not truth clear for some and muddy for others? Does truth depend on your level of life's awareness? Does not truth hurt many often times in life? Does not the truth become mixed with lies due to man's manipulation? Is the truth palatable for all? If truth is truth, why do not all embrace it? Truth will always matter because U are in the middle of it right? Does truth teach us right is right and wrong is wrong? Does not one's truth run a lover away? Does not the truth come with humble teaching moments? Does not a poet's truth inspire and motivate its readers? What is the true expression of truth? Does truth have to always be spoken to be received? Does not your truth push you forward? When you leave this plane will your truth go with you or get left behind in this world? The truth is... |
Do you see it?!
The day will come when wisdom overtakes foolishness Fools will become clueless The wise and righteous will become the rulers of brand new dreams and all permanent solutions Operating without confusion Classism won't exist Capitalism will take a hit Racism will walk off the cliff Communism will drown in a ditch The poor will make the rich hitch a ride to a cataclysmic event Allah will erase all of his righteous servants sins, mortgages and rents Water will become purified and clear All cloudiness will disappear Sipping from moral fountains of truth and swimming in ethical bliss Righteous intent is meant to ascend and elevate into the realm of the heavens where men and women always win Greatest team ever The children will carry that legacy forever The youth will be made bra... |
Highest plane(Spiritual love affair)Souls tied in the perfect knot like a tie As if the The Most High tied it So spiritually intertwined that when I spoke you spoke and when we did speak we both uttered the same exact verbiage that only us and The Most High could fully understand A few knew but no mortal could ever grasp the connectivity of our spiritual Wifi that was not made from or of this world, your frequency used to frequent me, we'll always be together permanently We often spoke in parables and metaphors to comfound each other while confusing others Our love was personal, divine, righteous and sacred, it wasn't for the whole world to witness, it was Timeless, Genuine, Humble and Patient Each time we vibed, Time was on our side, I don't even remember if seconds even elapsed without me experiencing you in some way, shape or form, you were always there, even when I was sleeping, you wiped my tears away and you told me no more weeping You Plante... |
Hurricane Ida
Without the Help of FEMA and with no vaccine I was surviving things
Giving God all the praise and all the esteem, I proved that I was the last of a dying breed
Can't silence me, catch the poetic breeze If a man don't think then a man don't eat
Made sure my people were straight, God was blessing them through me
Humble ol me, got the DNA of the meek, why would I allow anyone to change me or claim me, where I'm from the men barely make it to see 23
the women look down on you for calling them Queens deep down in New Orleans
Everyone is panicking but no not me as long as I have breath in my body I'm going to keep surviving things
Big Ida such a helluva storm, she made both New Orleans and New York city look so small
I really wished that the wind wo... |
Say goodbye to the Oppressors
Mentally free, no longer caged, trying to persuade me with bread, no longer chasing money, you can save your advances for another slave
Must admit that over the years I've gotten paid but I've built my calf muscles up and walked in righteous ways
In my life no jail time and no bloodshed you can't tie me in with the destruction of my people in any type of way
Saved for stormy days, kept my spirituality safe, always believed in the promise of The Most High that there will be bright and shiny days for those that walked in humble ways
I chose to be brave, I chose not to be afraid, the enemy could never take my soul and I mean every word I say In every noun that I place and in every verb that I trace, if you follow the trail all good deeds were the end results my Mama was never disgraced
I was always... |
Internally and Externally intertwined
Mesmerized by the essence of your divine soul your true being. How is it possible for a being to be so upright and perfect from within?! Those with dirty hands could never keep you in their grasp as you are delicate sand by the day and star dust by the night The only thing that attracts you is pure light Light upon light brings extreme light Blinding light to those that wine and dine in darkness Meals with you are always on a heavenly terrain in a self created setting You are pure Love Love that is bliss Love that is light Love that is peace Love that is near Love that is kind Love that I can see and hear you are that Love that will never allow me go blind. Love that is help Love that is guidance Love that is truth You made me stop lying You give birth to galaxies and when galaxie... |