Ms.Toya2
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just different
So there's this girl
Who is lost in this world
She walks around
Looking down at the ground
Nobody even cares
So she never shares
But truth is she's hurt
Always feeling lower than dirt
In the shower crying
Feeling tired of trying
She yells inside
Getting kinda hard to hide
So will somebody help her
Somebody love her
She's looking for you
Will you come thru?
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COMMENTS
xclusive says: Well said. Nice write. |
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Ms.Toya2 says: Thank you |
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msmaja187 says: I'm one of those girls. Maybe if we looked up every now and then we'd see we're not alone. Love this peace |
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EmpressRee says: a piece that I related to back in my high school days and now 10 years later can still feel that |
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rie_cee says: Nice write! |
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2b2b2 says: Superb Capture....ONE |
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The Immortal Wize says: Poignant! |
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Coloured_Asian says: I like this it's raw and real |
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Kingqadardwon' says: This is a Gem! The story of many women lives.. Outstanding write. |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY Ms.Toya2
So there's this girlSo there's this girl Who is lost in this world She walks around Looking down at the ground Nobody even cares So she never shares But truth is she's hurt Always feeling lower than dirt In the shower crying Feeling tired of trying She yells inside Getting kinda hard to hide So will somebody help her Somebody love her She's looking for you Will you come thru?  |
