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Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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Damaged Ceramics

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My mind has been clay

atop a potter’s centrifugal tray –

in between the fingers and thumbs of unseen hands

message-ing my brain…

making it numb to the pain inflicted for ill gotten gains.

Conflicted, I should be, but he reshaped my shame.

 

Though I struggle to retain my form,

his brainstorms and comic media showers overpower.

Before long, I am transformed.

Doc-īle in the face of hos-tīle takeovers by Rothschilds in Range Rovers in their new world make-over!

Same song… once the break’s over.

 

But revolutionaries make breaks replay like DJs

to give the sleeping giant time to grow in its defiance;

and as the tables turn, we relearn our self-reliance

(since dependence on these tyrants is what ensures our compliance).

Still, they infiltrated our movements.

 

Same song…economic improvements for the few who got the traction to go platinum,

while fewer still who went mogul…got taken global –

flashing illuminated gang signs.

A zero-sum total in the sane minds of the hopeful!

 

But this is how they play us:

Expertly manipulate us like stop motion figurines.

Damn Rudolph and his red nose!

They still taking us for blithering fools until great Gaia smashes all to smithereens!

 

Leaving me a shard – broken but free of the jar that had been me –

now mentally hard and sharp enough to draw blood from the potter.

 

-HymnAgen

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DallasCowgirl says:

This was a power-piece! Both powerful and wisdom-ful. We can't let them shape us! A shard I am definitely learning to be. Mentality and personality. We are the elite, indeed.

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KingQadarDwon' says:

It's always a pleasure to witness like minded people who understands the plot if the world.. The majority are blinded because they chase false realities.. Moving piece, and that Rothschild line was sick, only a wise person would thank of that...
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EmpressRee says:

"Still, they infiltrate our movements" they have seen how the minds work and they use it against us. People using the same tactics that was once used too afraid to think beyond, break free and become that shard that made a difference

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Dreka says:

This is beautiful!

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Dreka says:

Do you have an instagram?
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hymnagen says:

Poets, I thank you for your valuable time! That you chose to spend it reading my work is always my honor. @Dreka: I don't use it because I know myself too well to stay too connected -I would end up wasting too much time! Peace

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2b2b2 says:

FANTASTIC Brother hymnagen.....and you already know how I feel.....Exemplary!!! WRITE ON!!

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hymnagen says:

Eye>

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hymnagen says:

Eye to eye, my brotha! Salute!
 

debbieownsthis says:

One of life's greatest pleasures is to read from others who also have the eye to see beyond the surface... It is a real eye opener as a human to learn that our minds was once manipulated by media... and you conveyed it perfectly! I agree, very powerful ink indeed!
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hymnagen says:

I'm honored that you feel this debbieownsthis. Thank you

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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hymnagen says:

Thank you latin_lover

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