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What's it gon be?(yeah you)

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Put me into your plans or erase me out of your life, I too can find someone who's willing to hike mountains with me and risk there life, while latched on to me 7,000 feet above the deep blue hue, with the world watching us and we looking like a pool stick and a cue, all from their view. Could've been you, should've been you, our story was partially fiction, some things just wasn't true. I offered you all of me, but you only took some of me, 💯/💯 deal ,take it or leave it, if not depart from me and let me be a King to a virtuous appreciative Queen. Every time I wanna leave something keeps pulling me back and knocking me off track of living out my visuals and my ambitious ideas of placing my woman's head over the hills. She'll have her own monument and every day I promise to comment and even chisel it better than the day before, Jack wouldn't even be allowed to chase Jill up that hill anymore. I'm not living in that cage anymore, so free me and let me be me, if you can't school with me then you can't degree with me, I mean learn with me and agree with me on the things that your eyes haven't seen, but my what my spirit has dreamed, to one day make this a reality and if it's not you then that would be a tragedy for you and a milestone for her.... Qadar Dwon'

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Just_Me_Kelee says:

I love this. It so embodies my feelings right now.

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2b2b2 says:

Tight Piece!!! ONE
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KingQadarDwon' says:

Thanks y'all... I really appreciate the comments...
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The Immortal Wize says:

I love that 100/100 deal some people just don't understand that 50/50 won't do. SNAPS to the King

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LP45 says:

Very good write you got here. Tell it like it is or at least how it should be. Thanks for sharing.
 

DeeliteNMe says:

This was a beautiful expression and a wonderful write!!! I adore this!!!

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KingQadarDwon' says:

Thanks my vibe family.. I really appreciate the comments..
 

Ty Burgess says:

I love it! You can hear the hint of hurt but the over flowing confidence as you read it. Well... based on how I said it in my head as I read it lol

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