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Will You:

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Will you take me from here?

take me to a place where love

does not equal fear?

Will you take my hand?

lead the way to happyness,

stay near me, protecting me

like I was your only friend?

Will you show me how real love feels?

I'm searching for love and I hope I find it,

If not, will you be the one to entice my mind

and seal the deal?

Will you forsake me?

leave me all alone, 

scared as can be?

Will you break down the steel gates

that protects my heart?

Using everything within you, to break down the gates,

to get to what you want,

even if you have to begin at the start?

I know you can tell that I'm afraid,

scared to let my guard down.

I know, I know your not like the rest,

I never said you were,

It's just that, I don't want to

bring up feelings I keep repressed,

Will you be the one to grant me piece of

mind from this distress?

Will you help piece back together what was 

once my heart?

promise me never to tear it apart?

Will you be the one to help heal what has been 

broken?

bring back the person that use to be me?

I don't want to talk about my past, I want to keep it

Verboten.

All I want to know is Will you?

 

Inspired by a friend.

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

It would be hard to read this and not feel something but what?, it says so much and touched me deep emotionally nothing short of breathtaking. I love it!!! tretre much respect

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DeeliteNMe says:

I really can relate to this very well!!! Sometimes that all any person wants...to feel wanted and appreciated!!! Love it!!!

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2b2b2 says:

Bitter-Sweet Capture....well played....ONE
 

DallasCowgirl says:

Beautiful!!

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