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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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we formed an ocean with our tears

we've climbed the stairs too

just to get to a place called up there

somewhere in our hearts

we made it there

without falling apart

we warred for nothing

we went for it all

who can stand between us

who can judge us

what I'm trying to say

I'm just trying to convey

we've gone through it all

we are still on our way

okay this is too mushy

for me but you make me feel

like I'm melting sometimes

I hear bells chime in my mind

there's nothing but love in these lines

you could see rainbows

even if you're colored blind

I'm in too deep no plan for retreat

didn't look before I leaped

bled from hitting concrete

you kissed my cuts and patched me up

made me forget that I fell so hard

the only indication is my scars

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Alekia Abeni says:

Yes sir! I love this. Please write on!

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