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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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take the boards off the community

no holds barred bring back unity

sanity in the shanty more legal goods

in the hoods some fresh fruit in our stores

would do us a world of good 

more concrete on the streets too much

glass under a child's feet

stop eating chicken from the China man

I keep telling you

"THAT AIN'T NO CHICKEN MAN"

tear down these walls they're hindering

every body's not a crook you'd know that

if you took a closer look

too busy walking by with discuss

in your eyes just open your eyes

before you imply feeling your mind

with all the lies Jesus knows why babies cry

I hate roaches more than flies still I hate

flies and dilapidated firebombed buildings 

caved in roofs that families use to

reside under don't blame it on the weather

it never rained nobody heard thunder

who was ever given their just due

Ha, guess who, just you

no need to wonder why we don't trust you

the wealth was stolen from us

why should we say thank you

just be honest who's grateful

for bondage from flying first class

to being treated like the worse class

 looking out of the window at

 our shadows walking on broken glass

we are tired of being treated like

we are worthless those who disagree

need not apply, do not reply

skip this or just walk on by

alive and feeling earth less

how can you unearth

that which came from the dirt

coexisting on a  birth list 

I see a bug I'm gone squash it

not famous enough to be taken hostage

still a name on a watch list

never stutter never lisp

never feared a Blood nor a Crip

brothers, sisters my people

my equal can't afford to fear

my own people

mastered breaking my fall

in case  I slip in my own spit

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BoRhyme says:

WOW!!! A GOD FOR REAL!!! ALWAYS INSPIRE ME!!! ALWAYS HEARTFELT AND STRAIGHT TRUTH!!! VERY RELATABLE!!! ALWAYS ENJOY EVERYTHING YOU PUT OUT!!!
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KingQadarDwon' says:

Soooooooo outstanding! You never disappoint.. This is all truth and not even an inch of an lie... Love your work, you have mad skills and a mad mind... Keep dropping that Lava..
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2b2b2 says:

FANTASTIC.....this is DOPE, SICK, WICKED, FRESH, yes, yes, ALL THAT....thanks Wize....ONE
 

Halfblacksheep1 says:

These are beautiful words....

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