The Immortal Wize

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Heaven Bound

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there is no shortcut to heaven

you have to go through hell

to get there

you may think that

you want to change by

turning over a new leaf

that leaf will turn from fresh green

to crispy brown

every thing around you

will crumble and fall apart

everybody you try to love will

continuously break your heart

the closer you try to get to God

the distance will seem worlds apart

you will lose everything

by death or theft though you may

try to hold on there will be no one

and nothing left

you will struggle so much

you'll be out of breath

you will suffer so much on your

journey like you never left

you will curse the day

your mother had you

feeling like God forgot you

you will try your best to win

but you will often lose

asking God why, why God

I'm just trying to make it through

not being able to understand

how come certain doors close on you

you will be overwhelmed and drowning

in humiliation people will move away from

you like you have the plague

and treat you like you have a disease

change is work and it's going to hurt

the truth is it's not sweet

you can't sugar coat it

to make the pill easier to swallow

to keep it real it's going to feel

like you got hit in the head

with an anvil

so it best to have some advil

everything believe me everything

that can possibly go wrong will

you will feel like turning around

and going back

though some do, don't do that

why? because eventually you

will have to start all over again

returning to places and going through

things that you've already gone through

cry, oh yes my friend you will cry

like somebody you love died

you will become so sick and tired of

yourself that you won't be able

to stand your self you will find yourself

hopeless, helpless, homeless or on the verge

join forces with the devil

you will want to merge

you may even become addicted

to a controlled substance

trying to calm your nerves

you will feel so low depression

will follow you where ever you go

you've had enough feel like giving up

you say whats the use in trying

thinking that you would be better off dying

then you remember when you were in

the den and God shut the jaws of the lion

you were in the furnace but never cremated

you start to see all the places

you start to see all the times that you

could have been destroyed

I mean taken out but you made it

how? then you smile realizing how close

you came to giving up

knowing you can go another mile

look at you, you have been succeeding

all the while then you understand

that you will never go to heaven

because you're already there

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OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize

Do Not Grieve The Vibe

I am loyal to the cause hold the applause a snap or two will do I only get a few guaranteed to get five from Love Supreme used to get ten damn I miss Mr. Lowe the giver of the best comments I hope he's in good health wish him and his the best I'm thankful for the views gratitude to those who do even more for the muse shout out to Guru too we all going through slipping on peels no pulp all juice I come to realize if I keep my head stuck in the clouds space is all I'll ever see shout out to the stars on high deep thinkers go deep to think deeper thoughts paintings on the wall my heart is a gallery that's how much I love art told em from the start I don't stop I pause go undetected until I'm called out of the shadows me and my dark side we like twins we are two of the same flame we don't battle with the light we understand we too are in the same grade doing our best to pass the test "to keep the Vibe alive" hold the applause snap for the cause it's poetic protocol and good karma too...

How To Flow

the best advice I been given is "just write" and it's the best advice I can give to you don't think about it just write a bunch of stuff keep your head down and don't let up until there's no more room for words grab another sheet of paper and do it all over again do it until there's no more ink left in the pen if you can then grab another pen and do it all over again again and again until the process is effortless

What It Means To Me To Breathe

you mean more to me than a Christmas tree you mean more to me than what's underneath you mean more to me than gifts I receive you are the reason I breathe and as long as I breathe you will mean more to me

Day To Day

often we pretend to be happy but we're not really happy we all can't be happy some of us are truly sad "why is that" why can't we all be happy at the same time wouldn't that be a beautiful sunrise and wonderful time to be had a time when no one is sad a world full of eternal joy peace and happiness John Lennon said it best "you may say I'm a dreamer but I'm not the only one" true to life art imitating the light of all the people who still "Imagine"

Forgive You

forgive you and go on to pursue a better you if you stumble if you fall if you get clumsy and make a mistake forgive you and follow through if you run into a dead end find another way to go if you fall into a hole find away out of it if you run into a brick wall it might take some time but take the time to find away around it forgive you and continue if you stop for a brief rendezvous that leaves you hurt alone and feeling blue forgive you and give your wounds time to heal if you turn back because someone called you to reroute you attract your attention to distract you see it through forgive you then proceed to learn from it all you will grow from it all the plan is to make you strong forgiveness is in you to forgive you

It Hurt To Say

I used to have friends that's what I called them time has a way of telling it all were they really there for me is this truly happening thinking of all the time I spent spending time with nothing to show for the time spent that's how come I'm bent on being alone after all the time spent being alone sick and tired of wondering what did I do wrong knowing all along you ain't gotta do nothing to nobody for somebody to do you wrong my mama told me "you gotta trust somebody" it went through one ear and out the other word to mother we not like each other she stayed home I went out and discovered uncovered truth untold written letters I can't unfold the family tree don't mean much to me lost everything I love it's just a bunch of leaves it takes a lot of things to get me to smile when I do it's worth all the pain

Revolving

we gotta go we can't stay here we all got a time day and year to go some of us might go tomorrow some of us might leave today some us could be leaving in the next hour or so we don't know when how nor where we sure don't know where we going some of us will be prepared some of us won't be ready life is about coming and going some say we know why we came some ask how come we here all the questions that rarely get answered like all the problems that hardly get solved what do we want why do we want it what would it do for us is it what we really want can we do without it if we can why do we want it it's like we come on a mission with a job we're commissioned to do but somewhere along the trail we get lost in the cosmic stew some of us will go soon some of us will go later some will depart some where up or down the road some us might live to be old and become forgetful there goes what we knew what did we know what do we know we know we don't know nothing but we gotta go

Now I See It

I'm glad about a lot of things but for the most part I'm glad the lights are still on I know what it's like to sit in the dark for days waiting for Center Point Energy to come through like the mailman on the first of the month electricity is a necessity especially when it's 110 degrees can't turn on the AC cause it run on electricity all the ice cream is melting in the deep freeze the seemingly quiet cozy community is turning into a hostile environment I'm behind the scene loading a shotgun preparing for home defense in the yard eyes on the fence open the gate and get blowed away it's sounds a bit extreme it's not a dream but has been seen on a movie screen these experiences are predictively expected to become reality probably sooner than expected it's been tested don't know if we passed it we still here so I guess we did yet those who left we're often told their in a better place than we are I pray my mother prays more than me I meditate more than she does though she tried to m...

In It's Entirety

the messenger is often the first recipient of the message to be delivered then the messenger forwards the message in order to spread the content received if you're the first receiver of the message then the message is for you to first apply to your life then proceed with caution delivering to others

A Flicker

if I stop to give you a light what you gone do with the flame I don't want to be responsible for the fires you set along the way I don't want to be the cause of all the smoke I don't want to look back to see the past erased