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lightness in the dark
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These Temptations

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eightball tapping on my window at a crescendo

pornography performing choreography

herb tip toe in on the curb

gambling is chronically rambling

Lord help not to lose sight of what I'm obligated to be handling

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KingQadarDwon' says:

Powerful message brother.. We are surrounded by temptations daily... Write on.. I know the struggle..
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The Immortal Wize says:

Love it!

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seriously though says:

I felt it very strong thoughts

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mlowe5 says:

Profound! It gets like that sometimes, Brother. The struggle to do the right has never been easy---handling our obligation has never been a piece of cake or a tall glass of water. Only to sit and do nothing has been so. Write on Brother and keep handling and fueling the flame of the candle of obligation. Peace, Love and Unity.

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