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Coloured_Asian
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"The world going one way, and people another."-poot

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Night Out

CATEGORY

just different

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Dark light filled nights

Speedy noise all around

No one wants to sit down

Down the street The band's drums fill the air

Truly nothing compares

Soon sloppy lips smear the day long ware

Mistakes become regrets Quicker than curfews or breaking in new pairs

Energized spirit restless and ready

For daylight threatens Illumination of last night's reverie.

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love_supreme says:

Wow, this poem tells a passionate story. Excellent write.

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KingQadarDwon' says:

This is awesome... You were the light to judge the darkness...
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2b2b2 says:

Great Capture......ONE

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BoRhyme says:

Great Imagery And A Great Write!!!!

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