Coloured_Asian
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CATEGORY
romance
The dew clings to grass
Even after the storm has passed
That's how our connection disconnected
Now we're left with the rumble but no thunder
Memories fade in sunset shadows
It whispers through our minds
Abrupt like explosions to supernovas
I can't help but wonder what we could have been
Those footsteps we took
Now lost in the sand....
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COMMENTS
DallasCowgirl says: Beautiful and sad |
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HumbleMeeksInFloetry4 says: Wow, Very Deep, Real, and Truth! Excellent write! |
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Jay Beach says: Dope. I like how every thing kinda had its opposite in the same line or in the next one. Very tight. |
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Coloured_Asian says: Thank you all for all your feedback it's appreciated |
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BrokenThe dew clings to grass Even after the storm has passed That's how our connection disconnected Now we're left with the rumble but no thunder Memories fade in sunset shadows It whispers through our minds Abrupt like explosions to supernovas I can't help but wonder what we could have been Those footsteps we took Now lost in the sand.... |
