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revealer

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just different

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i have said

a prayer to the creator,

to reveal your true character,

only to find

a truth revealed in mine

i was powerless

to contain its passion

the elements

of change

exploded within me

knowing

i could not handle it

i sought guidance

you could give

as your pride

confused you,

insecurity and fear

conflicted and collided

with your lifestyle,

preventing you

from providing

what i clearly needed

from you

you see

the creator

gives us

only half

the tools

we need in life,

we must

show our love for others

if we are

to receive and succeed

forgive me

for imposing myself

upon you,

in trying to force you

to choose

what i might have

believed of you

i could damage

your self+esteem,

somehow,

i share this dream with you

i mean no harm

to come of you

in my way,

i love you,

not what you do

i became the revealer

for your heart

if you see truth,

i have done

what i have come for

the rest depends

on you

C2

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