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Shadchan
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disquiet

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life

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holding my heart to myself

I hide behind a curtain of glasses and hair

whispers of all of me into a day filled with clouds and no mercy

make me walk circles around my life until I wear away softly

softly slowy smooth into my body

folding and unfolding   feari and love

 I love this quiet

turned on by the sound of my breathing

unfolding unfolding

into my life again

surrending my heart to the world again

hoping I am much better at love this time

my hair trembles

in new air

 

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shadchan says:

Hi. Upon reading this poem I see there are too many ing endings.

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Tali says:

I didn't notice, I thought this was beautifully written.

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Shadchan says:

Thank u Tali

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Charles2 says:

like how you do the introspective... beautiful twist at the end

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shadchan says:

Thanks for reading Charlie.

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DallasCowgirl says:

Well written!

 

shadchan says:

hi wings7 thank U

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