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i need my mom back

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Long days vanished
Without your presence
I find  myself  thinking of you
sometimes the tears flow freely
I find myself screaming
Trying to undo this knot in my throat
So I tell myself things are ok
Everytime I think my feelings are in intact the deep impact just strikes backs
Resurfaces from the depths
From all my emotions from losing you,
I just pretend your in the other room
But pretending is nothing like having the real you
Days go by, without you this  the  sacrifices I  have to pay.
Everyday  I strived to pretend my life will go back being the same
I never imagined losing you so soon
I never imagined it would hurt this much
Though my heart aches,
 Though my soul grieves
I wonder does she know
How much I need her back with me

 

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amin901 says:

Nice..a deautiful poem coming from a beautiful lady

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amin901 says:

Are you on any other sites or networks.your beautiful

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Charles2 says:

Nice outpouring of emotion about wanting your mom back. she is in her spiritual home. she is still free to guide and protect you. Deep respect. a mothers spirit is ethereal, never goes away. our ancestors spirits will forever guide and protect us from evil. use her inertial spiritual guidance... it will stay with you

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