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you think 
you are smart
however,
 i have no pity left 
for the fool 
you have become
you have now graduated 
to a place in hell 
where people go 
who 
have no heart
who love nothing and no one
anyone who will ever trust you, now 
is already as good as dead
you will never again have friends
        you who have sold your soul
no longer belong 
among 
the living
you are dead 
you have lost all
your positive energy
having only become 
the shadow 
of all that 
you could have been, 
would have been 
and should have been
and if the souls you have taken 
…did not go in peace
you will not ever 
rest easy again
until you 
rest in peace
even then, 
when you find your end
you will face them 
again 
there looking 
directly into your eyes
your son will ask you 
again and again, 
father 
why did you murder me?
if you are 
really so damn clever
then what will you 
have to 
say

C2

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2b2b2 says:

Poignant penning....thanks for sharing!
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Charles2 says:

hanging in the balance... is not cool. this is not a religious statement whatsoever. evil powers consume all who play the game. curses are self inflicted wounds

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mlowe5 says:

Poignant indeed...such a powerful condemnation of those who also tried to 'murder' the soul. Peace.
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Charles2 says:

tight rope

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