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Darkside Of Things

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Got this crazy idea I

can sit in the wooded yard

trying to catch night slip in

In vain I wait and wait as

day slowly turn to dark

Try to catch the exact moment

when darkness just take over

Tree line begin to get a different

color of green as night creeps

on in

Once again always overwhelmed damn

when did it get dark again

 

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2b2b2 says:

Ha ha.....yeah that dark can creep up on ya.....Tight Capture...thanks for sharing....(good to read ya, my friend)!
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you as always number one commentator friend indeed you are number one commenttator
 

LP45 says:

Great write mrmelody, lol, I agree with 2b2b2, that darkness will creep up on you when you least expect it. Write on my friend!

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Ladypoet45 appreciate your write on with the write on

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tinesia30 says:

lol you crazy. This started my day.
 

mrmelody7 says:

You crazt get that a lot since I was a kid, love to hear the southern ladies in their sweet southern accent "You so sill-lee thanks for your comment

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