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It’s strange the rugged roads

We traveled—

Bearing the treacherous loads,

With a love unraveled.

But social status would have its way:

Splintering society gradually splitting

Us astray—

Now, we eternally ponder with what to say,

When meeting on another bereavement day.

 

Who would have thought we would ever part;

Interwoven like the water and salt of the sea?

But the winds of change were veiled at our start;

Now I’m moored away from you and you from me.

 

It’s strange how the waters of life ebb and flow;

And how undulating love just seems to come and go.

Now all is forgiven and we’ve survived the sorrowing grief;

May God continue to grant us peace and everlasting relief?

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Charles2 says:

the tides of wisdom... come and go, if timing is on our side ...we rise, if not we fall stuck deeply in the mud or worse ...left with nowhere else to go
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Charles2 says:

the tides of wisdom... pass quickly to and fro, if timing is on our side ...we rise, if not we fall back stuck deeply in the mud ...left with nowhere else to go

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mlowe5 says:

Yes. Yet, our hope must remain in knowing that with the coming suns/sons, the mud dries; and between the cracks of the clods, there is that opportunity for us to still rise. Thanks for the read and feedback. Peace and Love.
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mlowe5 says:

love_supreme, your support remains appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
 

Belindathapoet says:

Excellent write!!!

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