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Hitsuzen
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Bond like Flesh

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first love

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Your last gift was scissors to cut our bond

Betrayal hurt more than I’d like to admit

To countless calls you will never respond

Sorry, might I ask what made me unfit?

 

Was all of this a tiresome ordeal?

You’ve grown sick of me and refuse to stay?

Why don’t you tell me how you really feel?

Why was “I’m sorry” all you had to say?

 

I won’t be closer to another soul

A painful lesson I have learned from you

The heart I once had is no longer whole

You have made and destroyed my young world view

 

Our bond, like flesh, is easily broken

Scissors are left with words never spoken

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love_supreme says:

Wow, this is a deep write. Loved it.

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jnikic5 says:

WOW. so deep. so real. i loved it
 

DallasCowgirl says:

Deep

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tjaigreen says:

Very poignant! Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more from you.

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fm110comphodent says:

Brilliant finish. May God Bless you.

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2b2b2 says:

SUPERB Capture...thanks for sharing!!

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