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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Judy

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are you half dressed or half naked
are you wearing enough clothes to be respected
are you like that, coz, you been rejected
are you trying to get attention
an honorable mention
coz, every ones talking about you
like playing the dozens
you're so delusional 
you think they like you
but, it's true, they do want to share you
pass you around and toss you back
like a 40 in a brown paper sack
you're just too loose 
you need support
is self esteem really that low
is there anything on you,
that you don't show
you think it's cute but, it's not
put it away coz, you're not hot
too much is revealed
and the truth must be told
with that many rolls on your body
that you show to everybody

 

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love_supreme says:

Truth words and very excellent write.

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Te'ArraPoetry says:

Love this poem! I hope young girls that come across this poem understand, you don't gotta give up the goodies tell his heart is all in.

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