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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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mama said it probably wouldn't happen
daddy said it never will, I had to do it on
my own, lacking support, I did it all alone
I was  told to leave well enough alone
I didn't listen because I was grown, no one 
believed what I perceived, I went on to
achieve my objectives, there were no
pats on the back or job well done, still
I rose up early and got it done, no one
taught me how, I had no role models
I was hungry and had to eat, something
that we all need, like love, we don't get
I don't get it, never got it and I guess
I can't give it, my heart beats the same
beat all the time, telling me to get up
and stay up, like an erection due to
intimate affection, I had to keep my
state of mind shined like a brass buckle
I'm still alive because I never gave up
on my dream and it is that same dream
that sustains me, daddy met his maker
mama's still living on borrowed time
she never paid back a borrowed dime
I left home with one bag and left the rest
behind me, it was just too much  
to carry and I could only check one free

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Mellow says:

I can feel the truth in your words.thank you for sharing

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Poetiq1der says:

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Hey there, Happy New Year to you and yours...This Prosery was a very deeply written piece of Art...and piece of your soul.....I was there with you....at those moments. May the Grace of God continue to guide you through this life, and May He Make His Face To Shine Upon You....and Grant You Peace
 

Poetiq1der says:

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Hey there, Happy New Year to you and yours...This Prosery was a very deeply written piece of Art...and piece of your soul.....I was there with you....at those moments. May the Grace of God continue to guide you through this life, and May He Make His Face To Shine Upon You....and Grant You Peace
 

prettygirl23 says:

Beautiful!

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