Some stories
are Just too true to be told.
But I'll keep it 100,
So lets let it, lets go...
I been rich, I been po'.
I been high, I been low.
Done stole out the sto'.
And caught charges for dope.
I even snitched befo'.
Got caught and let it roll.
A friend was I no mo,
But that chick just had to go.
At one point I was a ho.
Sexing dudes I didn't know.
Never believed in Romeo.
You fall in love I gotta go.
Met up with john doe,
Who took things real slow.
He reciprocated my flow,
And made my love explode.
Now I smoke, til I choke,
And write myself a note.
"You're not that girl no mo'."
Sit back and let it blow...
***Trying something new here, so please give me feedback, good and bad. I'm enjoying writing and releasing, sharing my thoughts and emotions with you all. Any suggestions on styles/form I can try out, let me know!***
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True Story (freestyle attempt)
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2b2b2 says: Just let it flow (like you have done), ain't no style unattainable, cuz it always starts within....like what I've read sofar.....Write |
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Cjsmom says: Thank you. I'm still a rookie, so I'm soaking up all the knowledge I can get! |
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LP45 says: I agree with 2b on that one, whatever way it flows is how it goes. That's the beautiful part of being a poet and writing your poetry, it's an expression of who YOU are. Very nice work by the way, Keep writing till your ink runs out. (It never should). |
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mrmelody7 says: You do good creative work so do it anyway you want just do it'. I happen to have a gift where I can just pick up a pen and go without a lot of heavy thinking. I dont write a whole lot but I believe in going out experiencing things then some point in time I may write about it |
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Cjsmom says: @Ladypoet and mrmelody, thank you! I think because it's new and so personal, I don't know how to far to go, so I get stuck in my head trying to make sure I am formatting correctly, etc. I will hold on to all of your advice. Thanks again for commenting. |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Nice! |
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True Story (freestyle attempt)Some stories are Just too true to be told. But I'll keep it 100, So lets let it, lets go... I been rich, I been po'. I been high, I been low. Done stole out the sto'. And caught charges for dope. I even snitched befo'. Got caught and let it roll. A friend was I no mo, But that chick just had to go. At one point I was a ho. Sexing dudes I didn't know. Never believed in Romeo. You fall in love I gotta go. Met up with john doe, Who took things real slow. He reciprocated my flow, And made my love explode. Now I smoke, til I choke, And write myself a note. "You're not that girl no mo'." Sit back and let it blow... ***Trying something new here, so please give me feedback, good and bad. I'm enjoying writing and releasing, sharing my thoughts and emotions with you all. Any suggestions on styles/form I can try out, let me know!***  |
MeI 'm perfectly made. Do you see this chocolate? Watch it walk away... * A Senryu is a Japenese form of short poetry similar to a haiku in terms of construction (5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line, and 5 syllables in the third line). While haikus tend to be about nature and are usually serious, senryus are about human foibles and are usually cynical, sarcastic, and/or have dark humor. |