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He doesn't know...

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He doesn't know

each 

time 

he 

flows

unwind 

soul 

deep 

and 

lie 

between 

his 

wondrous 

lines 

 

he doesn’t know

open w i d e 

to allow his verbs to 

vibrate thoroughly

inside me

 

he doesn’t know

every 

noun and then

he blends adjectives in

that stream in my eardrums

create serenading notes that

undeniably woo me

 

dig 

the

hell

out

the

way 

he 

pimps 

the 

alphabet 

 

using 

nectarous wordplay 

to foreplay me into mental

rhapsody

 

he doesn’t know

my 

imagination

literally imagines

feeling 

him spitting 

be-bobbing syllables from poetic pages that 

boost my attention 

to an 

un-divided-we

that

arouse 

my hopeless 

romantic soul to 

overflow at the end of each piece 

he 

breaks 

off 

in 

me

 

he doesn’t know

pray

he 

never loses 

his way with word 

in me

Cause…

every

time

he

flows

I

flow

too

 

©cj

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Te'ArraPoetry says:

Beautiful poem, captivating.

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mrmelody7 says:

Very rhythmic flow like red orange molten lava flowing down a mountainside
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Corey says:

Good morning, Thank you both. I appreciate your time and responses! Have an inspiring week!
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hymnagen says:

This is THAT work! My kinda vibe. I'm feling this! Thanks for the share. Peace

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Corey says:

Hello Hymnagen, I'm glad you caught the vibe. Thanks for dropping in, I appreciate it...please come again!
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Charles2 says:

Absolutely fabulous

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Corey says:

Good morning Charles2, I'm absolutely grateful you took time to read and respond to my words. Thank you!
 

Woven says:

Wow. This is the kind of piece that makes the reader anticipate each line. A poetic explosion of artistic appreciation. Maybe he feels the same about your art. :) Outstanding!

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Standing ovation! Excellent capture

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