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My Proudest Moment

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It took a heated moment of pleasure
For me to see after 9 months my greatest and precious treasure...
The first gasp for breath after that came the cry 
The greatest moment of my life brought tears to my eyes...
So proud and so full of love
I kissed my woman on her forehead and embrace with a hug...
After that the nurse cleaned our child
And showed us our baby and our child cracked a smile...
Wifey held our child for the first time
Said that her eyes and her mouth were definitely mine...
All I could do was laugh and I had no reply
In my vision was my Princess and Queen just blessing my eyes...
How comfortable they both looked together
I'm not only a Husband to my Queen and a Father to my Princess but I am also their Protector...
Make things better and carry that weight on my shoulders 
Able to move mountains, able to move boulders...
After that thought my Queen placed our Princess in my arms
My heart vowed that I will never allow anyone to cause you no harm...
As soon as I thought that my baby girl smiled
That gave me a feeling that expressed the love of my child...
I sat on the edge of the bed and my Queen placed her head on my arm
I said a prayer for our family and our baby touched my palm...
As if she understood my quote from that recited from psalms
It was an energy that I felt and was passed on...
A feeling of love that was complete trust
That nothing in this world could ever come between us...
I looked at her mother and told her I love her
And with our new bundle of love we all will discover...
A unity, a bond that will be forever growing
Because this is definitely "My Proudest Moment..."

 


Poem:  "My Proudest Moment..."
Created On:  09/20/2010
Created By:  Mr. Best365

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2b2b2 says:

BEAUTIFUL SHARE....a thought came to mind of a scene from the movie Roots (actually the best and deepest in my opinion) when the proud dad holds his child up to the heavens and says "behold the only thing greater than yourself,''.....truly the greatest gift is in fact life and to be entrusted to care for and support those that are from us thru GOD....thanks for sharing, top notch write.....ONE
 

Poetiq1der says:

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours....Fabulous and extremely moving....Respect to you and yours...

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