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Silent Admiration:

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Lights dim, candles lit, a beautiful silhouette by the window he sits...

Can you feel me silently standing in the doorway watching you? Your back turned to me, I stand there admiring every bit of you... slowly creeping behind you as you sit their in though.....


Shh....I'm sorry...I never meant to straddle you. No need to be afraid....Just sit back... relax your breathing... Slowly I back away...Admiring a man in though I find very pleasing....

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mrmelody7 says:

Very pleasing in deed good vibrations thoughtful imagery
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2b2b2 says:

Tight ditty, well crafted, thanks for sharing tretre!

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