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lightness in the dark
Love First and Love Lasts

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romance

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Water  reigns  on  this  date

Tidal  waves, signal  my  dismissal

Tears  form  this  sorry  epistle

Wishing  well  to  her  fountain  of  youth

 

I  burned  her  with  my  insatiable  desires

She  was  a  flame  I  lit and  then  relinquished

At  this  pyre  I  worship  love  remnants  eternal

Embers  glow  but  fail  to  start  anew  inferno

 

I  tried  my  best  to  catch  a  breath  or  break  from  misery

Heavens  witness  would  not  give  me  out  of the  blue  relief

As  even  the  four  winds  hum  her  name,  whistling

And  my  lungs  are  shallow  as  I  exist  on  fading  memories

 

Lifeless  is  my  nonexistence  on  a  world  for  lovers

My  death  would  be  a  victorious  eviction  from  this  earth

Creation  is  so  cruel  when  the  one you  love  despises  you

Travelling  millions  upon  millions  of  miles  to  return  to  love  terra  firma

 

So  lost  love,  if  you  by  chance  read  this  sticky,  sickly  testament

Don’t  forget  to  leave  your  forwarding  address…..

So  I  can  forward  you  the  remains  of  my  love,  for  your  mantle

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Catmartan says:

Awesome Read ! 2b write on !!!
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hymnagen says:

Wow, bruh...now I've witnessed melancholia mastered #Salute

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LP45 says:

Wow, a sad and powerful story. Thank you for sharing this my friend!
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tretre says:

" Creation is so cruel when the one you love despises you" I took this line in 2 different ways, Got me thinking...Always keep that pen movin 2b2b2!!!

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Coalhouse says:

Deep

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Corey says:

Poet, your poetic skill managed to make a sad, heartbreaking story of loss love, soul beautiful! I felt it soul deep!
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Nice!
 

love_supreme says:

Very nice!

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