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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Cutting through

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You're stuck between

Here and there

I can't feel your vibe

Check my pressure, see if I'm 

Still alive, you treat me like

I'm dead sometimes

Walking across my bed

Sitting on the pillow, where

I have to lay down my head

Tell me, or you here or there

I need to know so, I can go somewhere

I really do care but all my life

I had to cope

It was a hell of a fight

In middle of the night

A lot of blood loss, it was like

Walking through a flood

The sea was red and I was too enraged

and too in love

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hymnagen says:

You got me feeling some frustration and all I did was read it, Wize #Respect

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Poetunleashed says:

Remember this feeling of needing clarity
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Kewayne Wadley says:

I'm speechless. I loved this. The toll and strife of love at its finest. Thanks for sharing
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2b2b2 says:

Head Shakes Up

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