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miss_chaniel
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would it still be right

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Would it still be right 

Would I still be consider 
A strong woman 
If I put aside my hurtful  
Feelings 
Can I block this feeling
The come and go thoughts 
Of you 
Sharing Dna and sheets 
Intimate moments you and I shared 
I have to live with the fact 
You wanted it with someone 
Else other than me 
Am I making a foolish mistake 
Am I doing the right thing 
Will I be able to trust 
Your words 
Your feelings 
Will I get lost in my thoughts 
Image of another woman with 
You that's not me 
Will I be able to accept your 
Wrongs 
Will I even be satisfied with your 
Right 
Is this considered holding you 
Down 
When I have to lay with a lie 
Put my feelings aside 
Erase the pain 
Look through them guilty eyes 
Knowing things change 
Between you and I 
Is this right choice 
For my heart internally 
Is this love eternity 

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wordman21 says:

Nice, Very Nice...truth be told
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2b2b2 says:

DEEP CAPTURE....whoa....this is a heavy hitter....well crafted thoughts exposed (from the other side of the pillow)....Most Relevant...thanks for sharing! ONE
 

LP45 says:

A very great write indeed miss_chaniel. write on.

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