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Right where I dwell in pain

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Right where you left me

Holding my breath

Right where you left me

Stunned as you walked away

Right where you left me

Without uttering a word

Left me stuck in confusion

Right where you left me

Losing my mind

Insanity's play thing

Forsaken by my senses

You never turned back

Never gazed back

If you had

You would have known

I stood right there

An immovable object

Motionless

Pondering how it came to be

That you walked away

Simply disappeared

Disappeared with the sunset

 A picture perfect moment

Yet its beauty lost on me

Because it left me broken

Right here where you left me

Is where I forever rest

Its where I dwell in the pain

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Woven says:

You captured that feeling of disbelief, when that dream appears to be a mirage. Eventually we step out of the imprint. Excellent word choice, well penned piece!

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Poetunleashed says:

Thank you for the beautiful comment

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